Pitch - Feedback (Sureyya)

Pitch Feedback

What went well:

• Clear and detailed pitch
• Liked the brand image
• Range of software used to present the work
• Good use of synergy
• Costume ideas
• Our ideas link with the original music video
• Good target audience and how we are going to make our target audience happy
• Good locations

What could of been better:

• Complete animatic
• Make the pitch longer
• When presenting don't read off the board
• Wider audience wasn't mentioned 
• Research more into the genre grime
• More detail on locations

Questions people asked:

1) Do you have permission for the Laundrette? - Yes

2) Explain why Laundrette is needed - It is needed because we got the idea from Trapper of the year by Nines and our artist mentions money so we thought it would be a good way to show money as we mentioned in our pitch already.

3)Who will be singing in the music video? - Sureyya.

4)Will you be using After Effects? - As we mentioned in the pitch already, yes we will be using After Effects to slow down the video when the performer says "Madting" and have them words come up on the screen as she is saying it as we are illustrating the lyrics.